diamonds
for your
birthday...
They'll arrive
most any
day...
I haven't paid
the bill yet...
but
you can keep them
anyway!
If the jeweler
comes collecting,
just smile
and shut the door.
It's OK... and anyway...
it won't be
your birthday
anymore.
I'm sending
diamonds
for your
birthday...
They'll arrive
most any
day...
I haven't paid
the bill yet...
but
you can keep them
anyway!
If the jeweler
comes collecting,
just smile
and shut the door.
It's OK... and anyway...
it won't be
your birthday
anymore.
diamonds
for your
birthday...
They'll arrive
most any
day...
I haven't paid
the bill yet...
but
you can keep them
anyway!
If the jeweler
comes collecting,
just smile
and shut the door.
It's OK... and anyway...
it won't be
your birthday
anymore.
Author notes
I would love to get diamonds for my birthday, so I'm sending you some... you can sell 'em on eBay. lol
A contest entry
- for those who have ME on their favorites by leander.
900 points, ended January 2, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well that would be most generous of you to send me some diamonds on my birthday
Anyway, the last lines made me feel as if this person is celebrating his/hers last birthday... It has a sad feel to it actually.
Thank you for the entry!
Leander -
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Oh, no... not sad at all, the diamonds poem. It's just that by the time the bill for the diamonds comes, it will be way past your birthday. lol
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Oh, DIAMONDS!! The gift that can keep on giving because diamonds are a great haul! I love the poem on this background.
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Whew!
Come and bring diamonds for my day, OK? A beauty of a birthday poem for someone special. 
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