Here lies old Joe Horny,
he got one of his wishes.
He finally got on top,
of the frigid, ole missus.
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He wanted to be buried,
lying on his face.
Everyone thought this
a mistake and a disgrace.
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For old Joe this was
his final revenge.
He built his own coffin,
the bottom was hinged.
Author notes
By ~ Maxboy
Background By ~ Little Feather
Picture ~ Is The Prompt
Bronze, HM(4)
In a list
A contest entry
- #144 PIF funny adult picture prompt by daviscth.
500 points, ended October 20, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Humor in Brevity by RatherImaginative.
625 points, ended November 29, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Big points....Write Me something funny by Riamh.
4800 points, ended November 17, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make Me Laugh by Pollycheck.
575 points, ended January 3, 53 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make the curmudgeon smile by MichaelLeeSmyth.
700 points, ended June 22, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
~PLEASE COMMENT~
Comments
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Thanks for entering
Best wishes always...
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Thank you very much for your comment.
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This is cute, in that morbid sort of way that I find endearing. Sometimes we have to be extremely patient to get what we want.
Thank you for entering the contest.
Peace
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Thank you so much for the Honorable Mention and your wonderful comment, I am very happy you liked my write.
Thanks Again
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i like this take on the prompt. i would never think that the message behind it could be funny but i like how you showed that side of it. good luck
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Thank you for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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Thank you - made me laugh!
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Thank you for your wonderful comment, I am happy I could bring a laugh your way.
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So they fell out yet again lol. Good one. Thank you for entering.
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Thank you for your comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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LOLOL>.. talk about payback on the spouse... hehehehehe
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Thank you very much for your applause and comment, I am pleased you got a kick out of my write.
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lol...hehehe,
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Thank you very much Buddy for the comment.
Thanks Bud
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lol, this is great
very amusing, and i can imagine there are guys out there who would do that lol
thanks and good luck
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Thank you for the great comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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LOL. This is really funny. Would like to see his wife's face when he took his final revenge. She would more than likely sleep right through it and that would be her final revenge. Great write sweetie.
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Thank you dear, glad it gave you a laugh, wait; what are we laughing at?
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Thank you for entering my contest. I think I would have liked to have met Ole Joe. He is a man of my own heart.
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Thank you so much for the Honorable Mention, I am very happy I could bring some humor to you, Ole Joe and I thank you.
Have a great evening.
Don
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Thank you for the wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.
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LOL! This is hilarious!
You have such a creative and mind
and a great sense of humor my friend!
Good luck to you in this contest and
keep up the wonderful work here!
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Thank you so much my friend for your great comment, I am happy my write gave you a good laugh.
Thanks
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Bwahahahha!
Best of luck!
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Thank you sweetie, I am happy you got a good laugh from it. Did you just spit cake all over your screen?
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*wipes like mad* mh?
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I would run to the courthouse immediately and have my name changed LOL. Just the graphic alone made me laugh! You show such imagination. I much appreciate the laugh and the entry.
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Thank you very much for the wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write and I was able to give you a laugh.
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LOL...terrific
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Thank you very much for the Honorable Mention,applause, your wonderful comment, but most of all I am pleased you enjoyed my poem.
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LOL Max my friend, only you would have thought of this one C
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Thank you very much for the applause and great comment, I am happy you enjoyed it. How you been stranger?
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This is hilarious! Excellent take on the photo! The only thing I need mention is that I believe "misses" would be better as "missus", but otherwise this is a very good piece. Thanks so much for entering my contest!
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Wow !!! Thank you so much for the Bronze Trophy, but most of all, I am so happy you enjoyed my write so much and it gave you a laugh.
Thanks Again
Don
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed it with a smile. Ok, I fixed it.
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Rock on! (hehehe) Thanks!
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Grammar Nazi
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good old joe
got his own way in the end
this is really funny
good
in the contest
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Thank you very much June, I am happy you enjoyed it.
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OMG!!! This is adorable!!! Thanks millions for the great laugh and the background is awesome too!!! Thank you for posting.
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Thank you so much Cathy for the Honorable Mention, I am very happy you liked my entry.
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Thank you for your wonderful comment, I am pleased you got a good laugh out of it.
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LMAO this is hystarical! A wicked write hun, that made me laugh so hard
Love the background to, very fitting. Good luck
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Thank you dear I am pleased it gave you a good laugh.
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