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Adorned

 

 

The cleansing breath of oceans mist.

Tender dew of morning sunrise.

Bold tides of sea's depth,

to guide your every footstep.

 

These gifts I humbly present;

within your heart and flesh.

Breathe, live, and love

adorned  by mighty currents

protecting your gentle spirit.

Our Goddess of the Tides.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

 

 

Author notes

Contest prompt: Cast me under a spell....
you are thus....Goddess of the Tides.
(of course you get a kewl new dress too!)



artistry: yahoo images.com, talented artist purplegothicqueen

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  • Overcast
    November 3, 2008

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    I like that this is so very different from the other entries in the contest (good luck with that).The imagery holds its own, too.Good stuff!


  • Legend silver member
    October 22, 2008

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    The beauty of return the favour is that one get to read works that they may never do It is always a joy for me to find poems that are so well written and hold the readers mind as they read This is such a piece One could wish for more but i have always said a poem finds its own lenght so i guess i will have to be contesnt with that which is provided Always leave them wanting more
    Excellent


  • penman gold member
    October 21, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and so well expressed. A terrific write. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 9, 2008

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    This is such a gorgeous and captivating
    picture you have chosen to write about.
    A lovely piece from start to finish here.
    Good luck to you with this one!




    Jeremy0826