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24 by Jem

24
By Jem


In 24 hours they'll be
Laying flowers
On my life, it's over tonight
I'm not messing no I
Need your blessing
And your promise to live free
Please do it for me


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  • Going Forever
    October 10, 2008
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    good Chorus!!!
    Best wishes in the contest!!!

    Magikal Fairy Poet