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One After Another

I've been watching my tears fall
To the ground.
I've been waiting for you
To wipe them away.
Every promise you ever made,
Is broken on the ground.
Every soft touch you gave to me,
Is now a slap against face.

I've been letting my tears
Wash the blood away.
I've been yearning for that razor
More and more each day.
Every lie you've ever told,
Is coming back to haunt me.
Every kiss you gave to me,
Is now blow to my heart.

Would you admit,
To me,
That you don't care?
Please admit,
To me,
That you don't care.
Every word
And every breath
That has escaped from your lips
Is pounding into me,
One hit after another.
Every loving touch you made,
And every kiss you gave to me
Is slowly killing me,
One kiss after another.

I've been seeing hate in your eyes
As you look at me.
I've been watching your love for me
Disappear before my eyes.
Every ounce of love you showed me
Has morphed into something dark.
Every hateful word you said
Is tearing me apart.

I've been leaning on you
For so long.
I've been noticing you drift away from me
All this time.
Every caress to my cheek
Was all a lie.
Every smile you gave to me
Is ripping up my heart.

Would you admit,
To me,
That you don't love me after all?
Please admit,
To me,
That you don't love me anymore.
Every kiss
And every touch
Is mocking me so sweetly,
One kiss after another.
Every kind word you spoke to me,
And every breath you took
Is softly beating me,
One hit after another.

I tried to make you see
How much you meant to me.
But then,
Suddenly it changed,
Suddenly you changed
Into someone I don't know.
Then,
You came to me,
Showed me the cruelest love...

Would admit,
To me,
That you hate me now?
Please admit,
To me,
That you hate me now?
Every slap you gave to me,
And every blow you made,
Is bruising my skin,
One hit after another.
Every bruise you inflicted on me,
And every tear I shed
Is slowly killing me,
One kiss after another.

Please admit,
To me,
That you want me dead.
Please admit,
To me,
That you want me dead.
Because every hit to my head,
And every kick you hurt me with,
They're hurting me too much for this to not end.
Every kiss you give before my world goes black,
Every kiss you give before my world goes black...
They're killing me too perfectly for this not to end.
Just one hit after another;
One kiss after another.

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This is really personal, but it didn't happen to me. It's something that happens every single day.

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Comments


  • Rhythm Child
    October 30, 2008
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    once again amazing emotion, such power in your words


  • snakeprincess742
    October 10, 2008

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    very powerful

    i think you got some inspirtion form me with my poem
    i think even tho it never happened to you , you still made it with such emotion and pain .

    geart work keep it up


  • yourbentangel
    October 9, 2008

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    Absolutely

    I think that this happens everyday, and you have captured something that very few understand and that is understanding. I found this to be delightfully insightful. Thank you for posting.P.S. The repetition makes it that much more powerful