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I'm a little teapot, hah!

I may be a teapot
Yes, I'm short and stout
And when you get me steamed up
Of course I'm gonna shout

Why do you want to hurt me
It's the heat that I can't stand
Here, just let me show you
Replace my bottom with your hand

Now can you feel my pain
Is it something that you like
To be tortured over and again
Morning, noon, and night?

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  • InMyFlames
    October 28, 2008
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    a nice twist to it
    the ending is nice

    "Morning, noon, and night?"


  • sense surreal
    October 16, 2008

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    Hi Heather,

    enjoyed reading this...a very angsty little teapot

    coffee?


    Anna Lee


  • KyleBerg gold member
    October 9, 2008
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    Haha!
    Nicely done, i love the bitterness.
    This is really clever, great work =)