I met him one day at a rally,
he seemed to be tha coolest guy there
He rode in on a chopper, covered in tats,
with wavy long flowing black hair
He got me some booze and we snorted some coke,
we partied all through tha night
We went for a ride he called me his bitch,
everything seemed out of sight
I know he come from tha wrong side of tha tracks,
I knew he wasn’t real smart
Dating for weeks he treated me good,
he get drunk and this shit he would start
He took what he wanted I thought that was fine,
I like it a little bit rough
I told him one day NO ONE treats me this way,
he ask do you think you are tough
I walked on home and I wouldn’t call back,
he got pissed and came over my house
I told him that’s it you big piece of shit,
I walked away and he tore up my blouse
“Get on my bike we will talk this one out”,
he said everything would work out fine
I told him before I ain’t no fuckin whore,
then he tried to take what was mine
I pulled out a knife, he looked and then laughed,
I shoved it deep in his arm
He grabbed at the blade, then his hand became flayed,
then he had the look of alarm
He reached again, so I sliced his right hand,
he winced and now seemed he was scared
Fuck you: you prick, I will cut off your dick,
and then feed it to you unprepared
He lunged once again and now that was the end,
I sliced and I diced without stop
Cry to me now, you poor pitiful cow,
you can't speak so you can’t call a cop
As he lay on the ground, that ridiculous clown,
I took everything he ever had
I walked away he did gurgle to say,
so I turned and kicked him in the nads
The police came on by, asked if I had seen Guy,
we argued and then he rode away
They said he was dead, from someone cutting his head,
I told them I was shocked and dismayed
Author notes
prompt art CAT2_cover_by_cellar_fcp atdeviantart.com
I missed spelled some words and used a little bad grammer to give her a trashy feel she afterall doesn't seem your proper lady does she.
A contest entry
- Welcome To Assassination Bar by LadyDementia.
1200 points, ended October 22, 2008, 15 entries
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Rather amusing little tale
I like it, I like it indeed
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Whoa... she got hers did't she!!! Wicked write! Really liked the story you told here
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Way to go girl! Hehe wicked write, love how she gets him in the end, serve him right
A fantastic read, thanks for entering and good luck 
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i have to say i laughed at gurgled
good luck in the contest with this nasty little ditty
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Cheers and best of luck in the contest.
Beware 'I have been reading your material and would sooo much like to help you smooth out wrinkles (If You Wish?) Impressed indeed
Linda
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LOL I loved this. It was fast paced and very brutal with a streak of dark humor throughout. Awesome job.
Mike
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Geeez...she sounds like a lovely lady 
I love the line Fuck you: you prick, I will cut off your dick, Way to go...I'd shove it up his arse 
Excellent write, full of so much anger, hatred and revenge
Best of luck in this one
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