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What Tears us Apart

Three days
Eight words
Nothing else
Nothing more

"Here comes Stacie."
"See you in geo
Buddy"

Distance.
Tears us apart
Before we know it
We no longer talk
No longer speak
Not to each other

Relationships.
Tear us apart
Without us wanting
It to be over
It to be done
We're gone

Confusion.
Tears us apart
No communication
I'm not mad
You're not mad
But we don't know

Sadness.
Tears us apart
Keeps me distant
I can't face you
Can't feel you
Maybe we don't exist

Anger.
Tears us apart
Makes me lost
How could you?
Why would you?
It hurts more than you know

Love.
Keeps us together
Makes us forgive
We talk
Work it out
Everything's good in the end

Author notes

Wrote about my best friend, Mike. Long story short, I miss hanging out with him. I hate his girlfriend. That's life.

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  • otakuchick89
    April 8

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    AAWWW!!

    I liked it!! It was really good!! and kinda reminds me of someone else... who is now a friend. LOL!! In the end life is good and everything works. how idk it just does. LOL!!


  • xXbroken lullabyXx
    October 10, 2008

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    i really really like this, it's so sad though. and i know what you're going through, excepts my best friend doesn't have a girlfriend yet, but every girl he talks about makes me so jealous, well anyways great write..i hope things get better between you two!