just once more i feel the breeze blow
Against my skin I feel it go
No further I will search the seas
To go far and wide I'll let time freeze
A moment ago I felt time stop
And once more I let my gates drop
A time ago i would hide away
But now I go with you to stay
A wide eruption of emotion
Brightens the moment as we realize the notion
To begin once again as the song erupts
To full blast of the chorus's trumpets
As life now goes on and the time begins
We feel ourself rise and come again
To once more live in a timeless wonder
And once again live in our dreams
Author notes
Hope this helps cheer you up its about the way that though we wish time would freeze for us as it continues we learn to enjoy it.
A contest entry
- [Cheer me up (again) ] by whiterabbit..
400 points, ended October 25, 2008, 24 entries
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Comments
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I like this and the ideas and thoughts behind it. It's well written and flows well. Great job and thanks for entering.
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