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Forever

I may have just met you recently
We may have move to fast
But believe me I do not regret one second of it
The moment I met you I knew that you were different
I knew that you wouldn't leave me in my worst moments
I knew you would be their with me forever
You should me something no one else did
You showed me everything
You opened my eyes to everything good and bad in the world
And closed them of my old childish view
I remember those worlds you said to me
"I will never let you fall,

Ill stand up with you forever,

Ill be their for you through it all,

Even if saving you sets me in heaven"
No one ever said anything like that to me
You saved me from myself
You saved me from that 
Something no one could ever do
How can i ever repay you?
i do not deserve your freindship
all i can do is the same that you have done for me
i love you so much
your my best Friend
i can tell you everything without even worrying of what you think
your a phone call and a run away from me
forever will i stay

forgive me for anything that i might have done to hurt you
my life is better with you at my side
please never leave me
for i promise you i never will

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  • BluRosePoet8488
    October 28, 2008
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    Other than a few spelling errors, I believe you have written a wonderful poem full of thoughts from the heart. I, too, have found with some people that instant connection as if I have known them all my life. This is one lucky person or you are one lucky person to have someone like this. Thanks for entering. Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
    ~Donna~


  • Symphony
    October 14, 2008

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    Sometimes when you meet people, there's an instant connection as friendship - i've felt it before, and second guessing myself, it's what you've found here. This was so well written, and I do hope that you guys manage to stay in touch for a long time to come!