I would reflect on the good times
Forgive enemies from the bad times
I would, more than likely die
broken-hearted and lonely
and a burden to my family
My final hour, would be spent
smiling and trying to laugh
until my last breath was gone
A contest entry
- ONE NIGHT ONLY by tarcus.
340 points, ended October 11, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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My family would probably plan my going away party,
while waiting for me to take that final breath lol,
No just joking, really I would like to spend my last hour alone, it would be to hard to watch my children face.
I really enjoyed your poem.
Great job. Good luck in the contest.
Justgot2loveme
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We all need to take a minute and think how out final minutes would be on this earth it is something that will make us better people goodluck
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