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I...

I'll haunt your dreams, and star in your nightmares.
I am the gray in your in your black and white world.
I am the shadow you keep trying to run away from.
I am the flicker of light in a dark room.
I am the awkwardness of your moments.
I am the question of doubt in your mind.
I am the silent tear to your happiness.
I am the moments of chaos in your defined life.
I am that annoying memory that keeps buzzing inside your head.
I am the burning madness that keeps you doubting your icy sanity.
I am the blood on your white sattin soul.
I am the broken heart behind your lying eyes.
I am the whisper of hope when you feel life slowly slipping away.
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to be continued at a later date

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Criticism or appraise would be nice.

If anyone has suggestions on the continuation, feel free to share.

I'll add more as I think of it. 

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  • mickey94
    October 10, 2008
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    i really like it gimpy its the good and bad of our world


  • meggie94x
    October 9, 2008
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    really good. love you.