She is no ordinary princess.
Although I'd play a Beast to her Belle.
She's heavenly, I am more like hell.
She cares for me nevertheless.
A sweet treasure, her heart is Snow White.
Her spirit's colored in many hues;
Bright pinks, vibrant greens, and brilliant blues;
Bright as an Aurora in the darkest night.
Am I a prince for Cinderella
Who lives alone in a wonderland?
Sometimes it is more than I can stand,
This desire to be her fella.
Mischievous as Shakespere's Ariel,
My princess is a sublime cutie;
A luscious Jasmine scented beauty
Whom I have not managed to repel.
~ for Stef ~
Author notes
Picture credit: http://www.sandersartstudio.com/catalog/Princess%20AOD.jpg
In a list
A contest entry
- A Friend to Treasure by BluRosePoet8488.
1000 points, ended November 3, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A deliciously wonderful write. She is indeed ' no ordinary princess'. Thanks for entering. Keep the ink flowing and good luck.
~Donna~
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I am glad you enjoyed the poem.
Mike
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a special piece for a special person.... beautifully writtten xxx
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She is a very special person. She makes me strive to be better than I am.
Mike
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This is too sweet
You penned this from the heart and I loved it
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Thank you for reading and commenting. It did indeed come from my heart. Stef has often been a source of inspiration for some of my better work.
Mike
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Wonderful dedication for your loved one! Impressive write for sure. Good luck in your contest ~Sie
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Thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed it. Stef is very important to me and sometimes I forget to express it as often as I should.
Mike
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Aw This is adorable you did a very very fantastic job!! This is truly magnificent!1 I absolutely adore this!! I love it!!
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Thank you very much for reading and commenting. I tried to find something that showed her how I felt about her that day.
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Aaw, this was gorgeous; she's some lucky, lucky girl to have someone writing something as beautiful and loving as this for her!
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I am even luckier. I write a few poems and I have a beautiful, loving woman that puts up with me. She is the best.
Mike
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Very nice piece.
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Thanks. I am glad you enjoyed the poem.
Mike
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This is so uniquely adorable!! What a lucky girl to have this poem written for her!!!
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Thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. Stef mean alot to me and inspires to write some of my more sensitive poems.
Mike
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Excellent
A very fine write, indeed. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done. -
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Thank you very much for continuing to read my poems. It is much appreciated.
Mike
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great job
another wonderful poem you seem to have the gift my friend. Keep up the great work I needed a smile and you delivered. Best of luck to you, Boog
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Thank you very much. Some times the words get strung together in a fashion that works. Your comment is much appreciated.
Mike
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A lovely poem that I notice you have put in Stef's list, where of course it should be.
A good take on the prompt and all the best in the contest.
Sue ;f
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She was one of my first lists but there are many poems that I wrote for her that I have not yet added to the list. She is my greatest inspiration.
Mike
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Ahhh, this is lovely.
Sweet poem for your missus
I like the princess references.
Beauty and the Beast was always my favourite disney.
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Thanks. I find inspiration in the Beauty and the Beast with my pursuit of Stef. I appreciate the comment.
Mike
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Miiiiike!
Hand over the mouth reaction... there Could have been some jumping up and down and other assorted giddiness involved... I'm just sayin' 
Aww, I LOVE it!!! Thank you sooo much <3 It's beautiful!
xo, s.
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I told you I did something that I thought you would like. I think that the it is equaled by your surprise call this morning just before I arrived for work. You touch me deeply. This is one way that I know how to do something for you.
Mike
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Mike
Seems like a keeper and just a pterry little poem that fits the picture perfectly. If it is for a contest then go for the Gold. Good luck.
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Thank you very much for reading and commenting. It is much appreciated. I entered it into a contest, but what I really wanted to do was write something for Stef.
Mike
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