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When I'm in the mood
for hammering mirrors,
I flip open photo albums
that double as accusations.
Your smiles compose the jury,
the pictures of me
exhibits A through W.
I learn that you can
spell the word guilty
in skeptical looks
alone.

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  • Manicmuze
    May 1

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    Love the ending... i think there's a lot that can be read into this.
    Intriguing though, enjoyed it.
    ~ w

  • K-Dense
    October 11, 2008
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    You're a beast.

    photo albums
    that double as accusations.


    -Shut up son.

    -C


  • poetryality silver member
    October 10, 2008

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    "I learn that you can
    spell the word guilty
    in skeptical looks
    alone."


    I am an addict in recovery, and I know the stigma that is equated to addiction and addicts. For a very long time I carried the veil of shame in my purse, until one day I left the windows down and it blew out and away. That's what I feel after reading your poetry. Thank you for this cleverly written entry. I wish you the best in the challenge.


    Much Love & Respect ♥

    Renee