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When the rain falls

When the rain falls
and the wind dances with the leaves,
I hide within your eyes
where warmth and comfort dwell.

When the rain falls
sleep invades my mind
snuggling against you
peace overcomes all fears.

When the rain falls
you'll take my hand
letting me know you'll never leave
a happily ever after

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lol..felt good to write again..not sure if it's what you're looking for, but hope you like =]

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  • crivanea silver member
    October 28, 2008

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    awww..that's so sweet!..what a nice poem..i wish for my happily ever after..but hey....every girl can dream huh?..lol...very sincere write..cute.thnx