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Hungover

Where
the fuck
did everyone
go??












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  • crivanea silver member
    October 29, 2008

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    lol!!!!....that's funny...i love it...although i think if it was hungover..it..wouldn't be standing when it says this..but cute..nice word choice


  • She burns
    October 24, 2008
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    Instant classic!!!

  • a n e s t h e s ia
    October 24, 2008

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    Ha. . . nice take, LOVE THIS-

    ~random stranger

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    October 24, 2008

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    There may be some who would say that to simply write " where the fuck did everyone go?" isn't poetic but for me you chose expressionism within the mandate of just six words to paint from the prompt with a zippadeedooda!

    The phrase adds characterization and imbues a sense of the party animal that isn't a pity-me animal, there he is, in a barren land, with three legs to stand on instead of four, no one for company and yet he's got the chill factor of a playboy looking for the next party.


    Do your title and phraseology work without the picture? Yes they do!

    Neat.


  • MichaelLeeSmyth
    October 10, 2008

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    As I am most of the way through a pint of V.O. I feel ya. Interesting look at this. I like it.
    Peace love


  • blinks
    October 10, 2008
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    A little remedial but ok.....


  • Pure Thought silver member
    October 9, 2008
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    I was there years ago. KNow the sentiment. LOL


  • BillyClyde
    October 9, 2008
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    Hahaahaahaha......love it!

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