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struggle
to
survive
another
day
Author notes
Propmt: write a poem using exactly 6 words
Photo credit: unknown
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by crivanea.
300 points, ended October 29, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Whoa...
Just what this pix speaks!
I don't know how I missed this one. I've never seen you do something like this before. You just never cease to amaze me Bro Dennis! 
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hey!..nice observation..i haven't notice it until u mentioned it..it is uphill!!.//lol..good job..nice 6 words
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This is truly an exceptional piece, I enjoyed every word ...I like the way you have approached the topic in a most creative way. I don't know if anyone else can see this, but your poem is also a shaped poem, it resembles the animal in questions head and antelers. Splendid title, you always put so much thought into short verses...what can I say? This is very imptressive...
Love and smiles ~Lilac
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The layout of this is fantastic I love the way you use those six words to your full advantage, and the title grabs the readers attention too - I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Keep writing
Polly
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Wow. Brilliantly written!
I loved the way it was set out aswell, made it seem better
Best of luck in the contest.
Take care
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Well done dear brother. Succinct and concise. A story told with brevity and creativity. Well penned and much enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest.
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