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Thoughts

To fly as a dove
Is to fall into the grasp of love

To stay and dry in the Sun as a date
Is to struggle and drown in the waters of hate

But to search the wilderness and to find
Is to forfill spirit, body and mind...

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  • Undead-Disaster
    August 3
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    Cool! nice use of rhyme, very enjoyable read!


  • cheshire psycho
    May 11
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    *gasps.
    i like it! its nice!
    u should add more though.. maybe.. haha


  • Captain Jenny
    October 13, 2008
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    'Is to struggle and drown in the waters of hate'

    I love that line. Short and sweet. Great write


  • Lonely
    October 12, 2008

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    Thoughts- short, beautiful and makes one ponder. Brilliantly written. Good to see you writing again. Keep writing nephew

    Love


  • Guardian of Shadows
    October 9, 2008
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    It's cuuute. I like it <33


  • Eyes Wide Shut
    October 9, 2008
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    Awe :] you should add more, although it's amazing as is.

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