When the sun rises; my eyes mysteriously do the same
Go through the motion; beginning the day
I do it all for them; for if they were not here
The sun wouldn't rise for me at all
Author notes
Prompt: When the sun rises
I do it all for my Family
A contest entry
- Line Prompt by crivanea.
300 points, ended October 28, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow..very personal...actually when i read this i image the speaker to be an elderly person..who every minute struggle to stay awake..alive..for her family..and that imagery is just so sad..but yeah..thnx for the poem..very nice job
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I loved the way you wrapped this up with the last line-a heartfelt message of appreciation and dedication to those you love. Good luck in the contest
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