IF it weren't for *her,
I ((would)) have done
something #~silly.~#
She lets me be *.m.y.s.e.l.f.*
I can f - e - e - l,
I am not |r|e|s|t|r|i|c|t|e|d|.
She is *human*,
She is r/e\a/l\,
She is _t_h_e_r_e_.
She stepped in when {someone} took all my control.
She /s\t/a\n/d\s for me,
Beside me,
With me.
((Together,))
We are
U n l i m i t e d.
[(That's all I need to say.)]
I hope,
You have a ((~friend~))
Like mine.
Author notes
I have a couple friends like this...
I hope this makes you smile...
In a list
- 'Baby.. You're Dirty, and you're Pretty!' • next in list
- 'They hold you in their hand.., you hold them in your soul...' • next in list
A contest entry
- [Cheer me up (again) ] by whiterabbit..
400 points, ended October 25, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Does it resonate with you?
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fabulous! i, too, hope i am lucky to have friends like yours... and i think i do
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I thought I had friends like this at one point, till one by one they stabbed me in the back. Now, I have one friend[female] and one friend[male] that I'd trust (almost) anything to, but I never get to see them, so I tend to get lonely. I'm happy you have friends this way.
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I like this and I'm glad that you have friends like this. I have some friends like you've described and I'm very grateful for them. Thanks for entering.
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this is cleaver... i like the |r|e|s|t|r|i|c|t|e|d| one... very nice
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'I'm sorry.....'
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Ahh Dirty pretty lol
I never really understood it but some like it
I did enjoy the poem though goodluck in the contest best wishes always
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