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Sweet spirit...

Missing image
Starting my daily routine
in mornings mist,
as a medium
between two earths
Sending silenced messages
over these hills
and hope they reach you
unscathed, 
beneficial…
Fragile thoughts,
valuable for us
between two earths
preparing the gathering
in our minds

So tomorrow
if you hear the echo
in mornings mist
these are silenced messages
telling how valuable you are
my sweet spirit…

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For the special friends who know how valuable their friendship is to me.....

I'm number 11 : Sweet spirit is my title...

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For my best friends here on AP...special ones...

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  • Smiling...such a loving sweet piece J. We love and appreciate you too.


  • Mistress Shadow-Wolf
    November 18, 2008
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    This is a very sweet and intruiging poem.The last few lines are my favorite.Good work!


  • DarkHunter
    November 9, 2008

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    This is a beautiful write about spiritual love that will stand the test of time. This really is an awesome poem. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Canis Lupus
    November 6, 2008

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    aw that is such a beautiful write!!

    That's reconnected me to my own spirit (my best friend), it's good to stay in touch with your core. Such lovely words here


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    Beautiful write and wonderful dedication and I'm so pleased you could take a random title and do that with it. Wonderful!


  • Debbie Hansman
    October 30, 2008

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    Cherished and such beautiful words. It's a gift within its self.

    My favorite..."if you hear the echo
    in mornings mist
    these are silenced messages
    telling how valuable you are"

    debbie

  • dillpickle62
    October 27, 2008
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    Beautiful...

    What beautiful words you write. Many best wishes in this contest.


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    October 27, 2008

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    such beautiful words and closeness...the echos of love softly whispered in the morning mist sending warm thoughts and tenderness...just breath taking and winner wrote all over it


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    October 27, 2008

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    awe so sweet twinnie thanks for sending this to me too best of luck in the contest

    Tasha


  • Ethereal One gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    ahhhh.............21 is coming up fast Jeannette. I think you will win.

    Good luck in the contest!!

    Jeannette


  • Confusedboy
    October 18, 2008

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    ahhhhhhhhhhh where is the rest?lol.


  • 245Trioxin
    October 11, 2008
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    I'm guessing your game is blackjack.


  • wattle silver member
    October 9, 2008

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    Don't be afraid. I have my arms out. I'll catch you.

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