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Deserted and Barren

Blazing heat,
Barren loneliness,
Deserted wasteland.

A contest entry

This is a six word poem. How do you like it?

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  • chilali
    December 10, 2008

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    Wow. A great take on the picture. You are good in short writes as well Such few words that held amazing imagery and depth. Lovely write. Well done

    Much love
    Ylova


    • go away.
      December 10, 2008
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      Aww, thanks! This took much effort, short as it is, 'cause I got so frustrated at having to narrow down all the description to six bloody words!


  • Ryan79
    November 14, 2008
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    Wow

    Nice discriptive phrases. Short, to the point and interesting. Great job.


  • crivanea silver member
    October 29, 2008
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    yeah..if its hot..and barren..i bet it'll be deserted..a wasteland though..hmm..some people love the natural state of sand.lol..thnx for the great words

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    Wow this is a sad six word poem but a great one non the less goodluck in the contest best wishes be well


  • Canadamomma
    October 9, 2008
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    great job here
    good luck in the contest

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