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My last night on earth

I'd jump in the St. John's River
not caring about pollution
then swim fast to the other side
where she'd be smiling on the shore
wearing her skin and nothing more

I doubt I'd worry very much
in festivities to follow
over where my soul would reside
come soul's absence the next morning
 
 
 
 



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If it were my last night on earth..

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  • hawkeslake gold member
    October 10, 2008

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    Another great read! This one made me smile, and I wonder what I'd like my last night to be... as always, I am enjoying your work.


  • Dalaney gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    Another poem that makes me
    smile and sit back in my chair.
    This is good, Mark. Very good.

    Love, Lane

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    If it were my last night on Earth I would get rid of everything I own so my family would not fight over it lol. I dont know haha weee my thoughts are crazy
    I dont think I would ever jump in a river. Goodluck

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