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Insecure

I'm trapped in a moment.

Where your gravity pulls me deeper,
eyelids heavy,
heavier.

Thoughts suspended,
Time halted,
though flowing on,
a waking anachronism.

reflection distored,
by wind blown ripples,
gales made of breezes,
a blind typhoon.

Torrid eddies
buffett to unsmooth my edges,
rattle my calm.

falling further
rent from synch
I rattle...
I strain...

worried

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ARGH!

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