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I'd slap anyone who got in my face
that guy behind me bitching--tell him his place
drink til i puked---then drink some more
hold up every single convenience store
til i got busted--then i'd run for cover
my one phone call?  call my mother
tell her i love her and i always have
make a break, slap a hooker, hail a cab
smoke a blunt, do some coke, getting wild
every fantasy i ever had as a child
trip some shrooms, my doom is already nie
write me a will--leave it to the world when i die
which is all good if i'm dying but i'm not
so in the meantime--bring me another shot

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  • go away.
    October 9, 2008

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    Nice :)

    Yeah, if I had 24 hours to live, I'd go insane. XD Good job! Good luck with the competition. Let the best man/girl win. Lol x