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Where the heart is

rusty red
my soul bled
home

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  • crivanea silver member
    October 29, 2008

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    rusty red...hmm..like sandstone..the soul bled..not the heart...home..because there r not no one else around..home is where the soul is..huh?...thnx for the entry


  • Gaffer
    October 10, 2008

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    Nice juxtaposition between the dark imagery and the thought of home. I thought that was unexpected. Although rhyme is often done poorly, I think it works here.


    • sunoir
      October 10, 2008
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      didn't even know I had rhymed

      It was the first thing that came to mind when I saw the pic. The desert (rusty red) home is where the heart lies wherever that may be.


  • Canadamomma
    October 9, 2008
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    great job with the contest
    good luck