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Pre-history

AS

IT 

WAS

BEFORE

THE

DAWN

Author notes

Nice to see something that doesn't show the markings of humanity.

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  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    November 10, 2008

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    This is different for you glad i read it, unclutterd stuff is good, this is like a newly cleaned fridge beforesome kid spillsthe ketchup, you sy a lot with little and it works well,nice write again


  • crivanea silver member
    October 29, 2008

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    lol..yes..a desert will be w/o any construction..too hot for humans to live in..good word choice..w/ only one noun..i'm impresse..

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    Well I think that you did a great job here I love it goodluck to you in the contest best wishes and much luck be well


  • Canadamomma
    October 9, 2008
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    well done, good luck in the contest