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Night descends,
taking up room.
Trailing stars behind,
like dust from a broom.

A contest entry

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  • Sunkissed xo
    October 13, 2008

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    Beautiful! the simplicity of this really adds to its overall power. it is just enchanting. stunning imagery there!
    Great work!

    xxx

    PS. How are the love issues going? I won't discuss them here.. but really, how has it all worked out?
    hope you are enjoying your holidays


  • Lady Michaella
    October 9, 2008

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    YAY

    Haha that's really smart
    I liked how it rhymed, most people think short poems= purple prose.. baha.
    I liked what you created here a lot, especially the stars thing, its smart. Thanks for entering