He wears sadness like a somberero,
Circling directly above his head,
Happiness covers the truth
Almost exactly like a mask,
The mask it covers almost
every thought of sadness
Unlike a veil, so translucent.
A contest entry
- because i feel like it.... (options) by VerminVomit.
1300 points, ended November 2, 2008, 23 entries
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welcome to all poetry
Hi izzy-gangstuh
I like this, some of us wear masks to cover our sadness some wear sombreros
good poem 
please keep writing, reading and commenting
Barbara
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um...i dont really see how it relates to the wordbank... so like... write how it does in the AN....
anyway, pretty good poem
"He wears sadness like a somberero,
Circling directly above his head, " <--best part
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