I cut
I can't stop
why am i like this?
what happened to me?
does god hate me?
does he want me to suffer?
if so, its working.
i mean i love him and all but please
stop this suffering
someone notice and tell
someone save me
someone keep them away from me
the sharp objects that are my only friends
tell them to leave
tell them to stop
stop persuading me to do it again
A contest entry
- What Are The Sounds Of Horror Within Yourself? by theredcatjazzoflove.
700 points, ended October 10, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I Don't Wanna Feel, Cause You Know It Hurts Like Hell by xXxIceQueenxXx.
700 points, ended February 9, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for entering my contest!
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The Essence of the meaning in this poem is beautiful, I cannot describe how wonderful this poem and its meaing, i try not to do this anymore the scars wil hunt me forever


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really good its so emotional i love every part of it
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the tears of horror i felt such a deep connection of my own darkness reading this here i enjoyed reading some one else thoughts good luck in the contest
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This is really sad, and I'm sure that many people can relate. This was a very emotional poem that you written, and I thought that you did a good job with this
Best of luck in the contest!
Take care
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What an emotional write. I can feel the pain just reading this. THANKS for sharing. Hope things will get better.


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