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Help!!

I cut
I can't stop
why am i like this?
what happened to me?
does god hate me?
does he want me to suffer?
if so, its working.
i mean i love him and all but please
stop this suffering
someone notice and tell
someone save me
someone keep them away from me
the sharp objects that are my only friends
tell them to leave
tell them to stop
stop persuading me to do it again

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  • xXxIceQueenxXx
    February 5
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    Thank you for entering my contest!


  • GothicEmoKid
    November 9, 2008

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    The Essence of the meaning in this poem is beautiful, I cannot describe how wonderful this poem and its meaing, i try not to do this anymore the scars wil hunt me forever


  • lil emo princess
    October 10, 2008
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    really good its so emotional i love every part of it


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    October 10, 2008

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    the tears of horror i felt such a deep connection of my own darkness reading this here i enjoyed reading some one else thoughts good luck in the contest


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    October 9, 2008

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    This is really sad, and I'm sure that many people can relate. This was a very emotional poem that you written, and I thought that you did a good job with this Best of luck in the contest!

    Take care


  • Patpowers silver member
    October 9, 2008

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    What an emotional write. I can feel the pain just reading this. THANKS for sharing. Hope things will get better.

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