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October's Curse

October's curse is drawing near
The thirty-first, the day I fear,
For I loathe candy and hate kids
With arms outstretched like little squids
Dressed as ghouls and power rangers
Faceless, mindless little strangers
Is it too much to implore
That they do not darken my door?
Lights on or off, it doesn't matter
The doorbell rings and I hear the patter
Hordes of begging little feet
Filling my yard and roaming the street
I retreat into my bed
Put the pillow over my head
More terrified than I can remember...

How much more time until November?

Author notes

I'm not sure what the form was (1-1 2-2 I think it's called). I actually had the idea for this last year but couldn't put the right words together. The inspirations really helped albeit indirectly.

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  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    November 21, 2008

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    Sorry to hear you don't like Halloween.


    Thank you for entering. Good luck in the contest and thank you for following the rules.

    I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment



    Happy Halloween and God Bless
    Tammy


  • MotorcycleFreak silver member
    October 13, 2008

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    Very Funny

    Being a Witch, Halloween is a special time to me, But, I can see the other point of view also I suppose. Very well written and excellent imagery. ~Peace~Gar


  • darell
    October 9, 2008

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    your terrible..

    you sound just like the grench that stole
    christmas. poor little kids can't even
    get a piece of candy on holloweeen.
    What kind of person are you? were'nt
    you a child once. Stop being so damn
    scroogie and let those children have some
    candy. It won't kill you. lol! nice writing.