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Never Ending Feeling of Suffocation

You’ve got my heart
By the throat
And I’m suffocating.
Don’t let me die here,
I’ll be waiting so
Please come save me.
I’ll be here forever so
Please come save me. 
Don’t let me die here,
I’m suffocating.

Your heart in my hands
Would be a dream come true.
Beautiful angel, please come
Save me, I’ll be here,
Swear I’m dying without you.
Eyes of venom, I’m infected,
Infected with the desired virus
Of you.

You’ve got my heart
By the throat
And I’m suffocating.
Don’t let me die here,
I’ll be waiting so
Please come save me.
I’ll be here forever so
Please come save me. 
Don’t let me die here,
I’m suffocating.

Staving for the taste of you
On my lips again, the touch
Of your skin on my skin again.
I can’t breathe without you here
My love, my sweet angel.
Carry me, carry me out of this
Place I wish did not exist.
Come here, show me your world.

You’ve got my heart
By the throat
And I’m suffocating.
Don’t let me die here,
I’ll be waiting so
Please come save me.
I’ll be here forever so
Please come save me. 
Don’t let me die here,
I’m suffocating.

One day we’ll fly so far away,
Get out of this run down
Overrated place.
We’ll go over the Atlantic
To where we think we belong
And I’ll teach my students
And you’ll sing your songs and
We’ll stand by each other’s sides
Where we know we belong.

You’ve got my heart
By the throat
And I’m suffocating.
Don’t let me die here,
I’ll be waiting so
Please come save me.
I’ll be here forever so
Please come save me. 
Don’t let me die here,
I’m suffocating.

For now we’ll wait in wonder
Of how we’ll actually turn out,
Oh, I can’t wait to see
The future you and me come
Up with in perfect harmony.
Oh, please, please come save me.

You’ve got my heart
By the throat
And I’m suffocating.
Don’t let me die here,
I’ll be waiting so
Please come save me.
I’ll be here forever so
Please come save me. 
Don’t let me die here,
I’m suffocating.

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    November 5, 2008

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    You effectively drive your point home. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.

    whisper

  • LoveNLyrics
    October 13, 2008

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    This was very well written. I like the repetitive stanza. I must admit, it's not quite what I'm looking for in this contest, but it's a very good piece all the same. hope it wins in future contests!