She wears music as a style
Showing off her talent
She hides fear under contacts
Leaving sparkles in her eyes
Confidence lies beneath her heart
Peeking out from behind a rock
Under, love runs from terror
Hopping to run into happiness.
A contest entry
- Be Inspired ~ Options~ by Jersene.
1500 points, ended October 17, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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I'm not exactly sure which prompt this is, however I get a feeling of hiding in the shadows...wanting to show her real self, but not quite confident enough to do so. I think the last line might have a typo...'hoping' instead of 'hopping'. Good effort. Thank you for your entry
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I really liked this, I thought that it was a great entry for the contest. I really liked the last line as I thought that it was excellent. Great job on this!
Best of luck in the contest!
Take care
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