It's not a bunch of lies,
it's the truth,
seen it with my own eye's,
love dies....
In fairy-tales
love is everlasting
In make believe,
you find your prince
In real life
it's goodbye
and tears fall,
no reason why
pieces of me
still holds on,
to you and me,
what we use to be
but I tell myself,
with a steady thought,
our love has died,
that's why we fought
A contest entry
- Love dies... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended October 23, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i love this poem jessi love destiny
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Truly a wonderful write I really enjoyed it and it is one to make great thinkers pause
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Love dies but is reborn lik a griffin, thru its own ashes. keep ur distance apart or u'll be sliced up with many slashes. love alot but also keep ur gaurd up. lessen it as time goes on but remain tough and the road 2 recovery wont be as rough-GummySamurai
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Ah..now when we look inside of the truth of love..we believe in the painful situation to reley the shapes of this love..this is really a touching description of the love you spoke ..thanks for sharing it...
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