snow falls floating down
children run out, cheeks aglow
snowy angels form-
In a list
A contest entry
- Seasonal " Haiku's" by wingsofgold25.
600 points, ended October 16, 2008, 44 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - haiku Only ~ ~ love in wintry weather~ by misticmoonlite.
575 points, ended January 22, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
winter Haiku
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congrats on your 2 honorable mentions!
this short reminds me of when i was little and whenever it snowed i would be bundling up and running outside and making snow angels. thanks for giving me a trip down memory lane. i was my dad's snow angel. i'm daddy's little girl. it's a lovely piece you have here. you have a beautiful way with words, sister. i love your short works. keep on writing and continue to make me proud!
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a beautiful haiku good luck in the contest
maralisa
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adorable
children can bring out their beauty in any way, when they play in the snow, little snow babies comes to mind, thank you for this entry...
good luck...mm
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Nice title it did draw my attention....you have painted images with these lines touching sensory endings as I melt into summer's heat.
Good luck in the contest.
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beautifully written, presented and seen
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Xtreme Beauty
Oh the words you chose have such extreme beauty to them. I mean they flow so graceful like and angelic like that it felt like we were all making the snow angels ourselves and just having a grand ole time. any ways just a very wonderfully penned poem and really love the warmth that radiates from the write. any ways congratulations on placing in the contest and keep on penning away
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Wow, you created an extremely vivid scene within very few words, and the scene is beautiful. Winter is definitely on its way, and I hope to get out there and snap some photos...funny how I can't handle the cold like I used to, though! lol. Great job, and good luck in the contest.
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Brings back nice memories
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I don't agree. I think this portrays the scene beautifully - just as a haiku should. You've done well here, my niecey. Way to go, and good luck in the contest!! It's a winner!
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I'd like to see this poem elaborated on =] it seemed too brief to be a haiku, like there was a whole bunch more that could have been said to make it more beautiful. But the words you used are good
GREAT job
diggin it majorly
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Awwww, snow, everyone loves it
I loved this, a very cute haiku poem. I think that you did a great job with this! Best of luck in the contest!
Take care
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So very realistic I can see in a few more days this happening in my neighborhood.
the first snow fall is always exciting.
I like it very much,
thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
ED.
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