filled with malicious desires
i watch you
you with your normal lives
your petite troubles
your tiny struggle
i could have been you,
but I'm not
I'm just off
Author notes
Death is not the greatest loss in life.
The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live.
Norman Cousins
i lost my innocence at far too young an age
A contest entry
- What dies inside by Starz of Heaven.
525 points, ended October 9, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Envy the sleepers? The more pain, the more awake. Pain is weakness leaving the body.
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true the more pain the more awake, but it is a wretched hope that pain is weakness leaving the body, no when pain comes it's not our weakness that leaves, but our humanity
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I think that this is a start on which could of been much longer poem but non the less you did a good job I do think that the word I should always be Uppercase thanks for your entry be well
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you're still a child at heart.
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