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The game no one can win


She cheats on him
then he cheated on her
her with a best friend
him with a coworker
both trying to make the other pay.
They played the game to the end
hurting each other along the way
in tell the damage was done
and clod not be fix.
They spilt the family a part
living the kids a mess
Living them to play other  games.
The parents play tug of war with the kids
And the kids play hind and seek from the parents
These games can’t be won
So all is lost.

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  • Amy-Peridot-Pixi
    October 22

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    i really like the story you are telling in this poem, i like the way you are expressing something that happens all tooo often and that it hurts everyone even the children, other then a few spelling issues, good poem, keep up the writing, ~Amy


  • PureRomance gold member
    October 9

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    I love this poem. This happens to alot of people sometimes. I just wish more people could open their eyes and see just how precious someone to love is.