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My Oath

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My Lady,

I am a humble man
I have little to offer but
the might of my arm
and trusty sword

I will be your shadow
to protect and serve you
all the days of my life
My heart is pure and true
and my love for you
unending

 

 

I swear this on my life

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt is picture
Image Katherine Dinger, image is called Staark Knight.

30-60 words

55 used

In a list

A contest entry

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  • JinSays gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    How lovely is this?
    Most beautiful, Sue. I'm so glad you entered, as I really love the way you deliver with clarity and raw emotion. ANYONE can relate to this young man.
    Thank you again, I hope I can always find something to inspire you.
    Much love, and blessings always,
    jin


  • Patpowers silver member
    October 12, 2008

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    Same here Sue. Nice work on this picture and the message you presented! BEAUTIFUL!!!


  • arafura gold member
    October 9, 2008
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    I love where you took this. Wonderful!


  • Riftkin gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    Sweet poet this is outstanding, you have capture his heart and words with your writing.

    Riftkin


  • karas
    October 9, 2008
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    spot on

    You have iterpreted the picture pretty well. Hope you do well in the contest.

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