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Lets take a step together

You are really important to me
Let me prove it to you over time
I understand its only you for me
I have been enchanted by you
I want you and no one else
You are special deep down
and you know I feel that
…you make me smile
waking up beside you
  my day is complete
I want it everyday
Be a lifetime for us
I Love You



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  • Darkest Lover
    November 24, 2008
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    Very Well Written And Very True IN Words

    Thank You So Much And Good Luck


  • smiling-angel
    October 9, 2008
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    beautifully written. lovely write. well penned poet.


    sooty