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Everyday brings more heartache within 9.10.08

Everyday is an inner battle,
My mind feels like its being trampled with cattle!
Why is this illness so damn hard?
To the point of almost being a coward?
I will keep fighting each and every day,
And pray for my mind to ease and let there be play,
There are days that I feel like I can’t go on,
I fight so hard not to fall into that pond!
Each day is getting harder and harder,
Like being pulled further and further,
Down, down into the ground!
Please don’t feel this has anything to do with you,
I’ve just been unfortunate to have got this illness,
One that does bring so much heartache each day,
I have prayed and prayed,
For help from God, spirit and my angels,
So what do I do now?
I have suffered for so long,
Please don’t let me have no more mental torture,
Let me become free!

Namaste Selfexpressive

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 10, 2008
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    Wow, I feel you! Sometimes it's
    very difficult to find that inner
    peace within you. Especially when
    there are so many people around you
    that keep knocking you back down.
    Excellent work here and congratulations
    to you on your trophy my friend! Keep
    it up and thanks for sharing this here!




    Jeremy0826


    • Selfexpressive
      October 11, 2008
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      Thank you for the congratulations on winning this trophy Jeremy... I am so proud to have won it... it is very difficult yes finding that inner peace within you, I totally agree my friend...


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    yes hon i feel this and the right answer besides the medicine is prayer i really enjoyed your thoughts here you expressed the tragedy very well