Of all the noises in my head,
the voices crying out,
that vie to catch my weary ear,
the ones that scream and shout,
I hate the one that seems the loudest
the one I'm tiredest of
it's the one that emphasizes most
the lack of any love.
©2008 rous
10-09-08
Author notes
Written for the contest: What Are The Sounds Of Horror Within Yourself? by theredcatjazzoflove
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2423537
A contest entry
- What Are The Sounds Of Horror Within Yourself? by theredcatjazzoflove.
700 points, ended October 10, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
A critical comment is invited
Comments
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this was an interesting poem. I liked the way it flowed. It seemed to have an interesting message in it. Congrats on the HM in the contest
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described and penned very well you did a very great excellent job describing the feeling of being strange to the outside world
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