Sunday is a day
for rest and relaxation
but today I am making it
the day of sexual experimentation.
Walking into the room
where you are laying on the couch
wearing nothing but my birthday suit
by your side I crouch.
Your eyes grow wide
as I unzip your jeans
and the devil on my shoulder
quickly intervenes.
I leave a trail of kisses
as I pull your shirt over your head
that devilish glint in my eye
means nothing needs to be said.
Crawling on top of you
I rub my bare pussy on your cock
feeling you grow beneath me
becoming hard as a rock.
Your hands on my tits tweaking
my nipples between your fingers
and the smell of sex
now in the air lingers.
I sit back legs spread open
and your hard cock slips inside
my hot, wet pussy
as our passions collide.
I unwrap myself from you
and stand by your side
I pull you up, bend over the couch
and hold on for my wild ride.
You plunge deep inside my pussy
with a hard delightful thrust
I feel like my pussy
is going to bust.
Palms against the window
there for all to see
but that just turns the excitement
up another degree
I can feel your cock
on my uterus tapping
your hand on my ass
lightly slapping.
The back of my neck
you gently bite
while rubbing my clit
much to my delight.
You start pumping faster
I know your about to blow
as my pussy juices
down your cock does flow.
Ah what a beautiful
sweet release
on this sexual Sunday
we are now at peace.
Please tell me what you think
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wow! um..... um....believe it or not I have actually fantasized about this...
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do you want to rub my face in it while I grab your ass. I say this "tongue in cheek" My tongue, your cheek.
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outta the world i swear
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Wow, that was very hot, sexual, erotic...explicit. I love it. Your rhyming was great and added to the experience. Over all a very good read, but I have a couple suggestions if I may:
Line 9 - 'Your' instead of 'you'
Line 23 - 'smell OF our sex'
Line 40 - 'degree' should be plural, but you may have done that on purpose for rhyming effect. Might I suggust making the whole line singular 'up another degree' wouldn't detract from the meaning and would keep the rhyming for you.
Again, beautifully written and very hot.
-Garrett
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Thanks Garrett! I always appreciate your feedback and your suggestions are always welcome. I did change those lines too! Thank you for pointing those out! Glad you enjoyed reading!
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SHIT!!
Now I gotta go to the restroom!! l.o.l. thanks alot! l.o.l. yo, this was crazy hott!!
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Yes this is quite the Sunday my friend! LOL!
This is hot and a lovely write filled with
some great imagery. Thanks a lot for sharing
it and keep writing!
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Hey girl this was hot! AP has been sizzlin the last two days LOL!!! great job
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wow....wow .... wow that is all i can say i think i need to take a cold shower...lol very good write love the ryming and hell its all good as fuck...
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Ohhhhhh yyyyeeeaaahhhHH!!!!! What a way to end the weekend!!! Great job Sisi!!!
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Sunday the best day of the week,
wow!! babe, lets make every day a sunday!!
A fantastic erotic poem, I felt like I was there.
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yummy!!!
The words that fall into my mouth...absolutly pure lust and seduction! The sexual tension between the 2 characters, the amount of description and the passion! All of that makes the best poem! I love the erotic poetry, I have to say, you sky rocket in this department! -
good poem, :00
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