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On This Day

On this day,
we are set free,
imagination,
is the key.

your worst nightmare,
your favorite dream,
your mind runs wild,
what shall you be?

pretty dress,
happy times,
Freddy Kruger,
receeding hairlines.

fifty dollars,
black hairspray,
lots of money,
used today.

i don't care,
nor should you,
because this time,
comes so few.

your worst nightmare,
your favorite dream,
your mind runs wild,
on halloween.

Author notes

ok so wen i was brushing my teeth something like this came to me. i promise you, it was better when i first got it, but it's now 2nd period and i had to try to remember it and now i don't think it's that good. please criticize!

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  • CowboyFan1
    October 21, 2008
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    greta poem thanks for the entry


  • faded dreams
    October 15, 2008

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    It's a different look at some of the things we make ourselves for the holiday. I was a little thrown by the stanza about how much it'll cost, it almost seemed to halt the fun. Keep pushing and you'll find just the words you want.