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Disregarded Formality

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In fields of summer sway
I sat like a queen,
as your blushing whispers of heart's secrets
sashayed across my heart.

We lay upon nature's soft carpet,
propriety left behind
upon society's demure seat
and our flowers bloomed
in fervent displays of devotion.

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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    This is just a wonderful interpretation of this prompt, beautifully done. Best to you in the contest


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    October 9, 2008

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    This is a wonderful interpretation of the given pic. Great metaphor has been penned here. Best of luck in this contest


  • trekkergirl
    October 9, 2008
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    nice picture. The poem was well written and you really used some good imagery there. Good job