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Precious lines

Their stars will shine forever in eternal skies,
Their flame of hope never dies.

The compass of my heart always points to you,
Wherever in the world you go, I want to be there too.

Emeralds twinkle sparkling green,
Like the sun upon the dew.

Like the rain that falls,
Drops like tears on my window pane.

Your thoughts about me are numbered
Like the grains of sand.

 

Keep in step with the seasons

And you'll find plenty of reasons...

 

Soft, loud, colourful, the notes resound,

His emotions portrayed in the depth of sound.

 

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  • Danna Hobart
    October 10, 2008

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    The compass of my heart always points to you,

    That is my favorite line of all.

    Thank you for entering.

    • harriet567
      October 23, 2008
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      Thanks

      Thank you for your comment - it was a great idea for a contest that brought out the best lines from everyone!