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Time Has Come

I can’t believe this is true
I’m finally losing all my thoughts of you
Of satin kisses and silver adventures
This is the path of less resistance

Deep down I’m drowning
Bells are trying to wake me from this dream
Echoes of another life it seems
The eagle is landing

What becomes of these photographs of old
What for letters kept for past time’s sake
Burn the memories and watch you break
Your soul is lost and your heart is sold

Everything I wanted will one day come true
But no longer do I wish those things with you
This was meant to be a message, do you hear
Everything I thought of us, has finally disappeared

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  • xDemonicxAngelx
    October 9, 2008

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    Oh I really liked this! It's like a final thing now, moving on, no looking back! I'm glad to hear that you're moving on A well written poem full of hope! You did a great job with this one! Keep up the good work!

    Take care


    • Canis Lupus
      October 9, 2008
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      Thanks for reading and commenting, I'm glad you liked this Didn't quite go to plan but was a theraputic one so it did the job!

      Thanks again