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Member Of The Frozen Forest

Missing image


She hasn't shifted from where he left her

Rustling of leaves - desperate cries for help

The roots of time have imprisoned her

The vines of sorrow never release their victims

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30 words =)
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A contest entry

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 18, 2008

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    Wow, this is such a powerful 30 words. Too many people choose this prison. Great poem, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.

    ♥
    whisper


    • KyleBerg gold member
      October 19, 2008
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      And then there are those who never choose the prison, but get trapped there anyhow.

      Thank you for taking the time to read and comment


  • chilali
    October 16, 2008

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    Oh myy!! Hahaha. This was whoa. I don't know what else to say. I am speechless! Great take on the picture and an amazing picture it is!!! Okay..I was just reading it again to tell you my favorite lines, but I was not able to chose. I loved each and every single line! Congrats on the Silver! YAY!


    • KyleBerg gold member
      October 16, 2008
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      lol! i keep trying to get to your poetry so i can return some comments.. but i keep getting interrupted and have to reply to yours I'm so glad to have found another reader who enjoys my work

      • chilali
        October 16, 2008
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        Hahaha! Aww.I'm sorry. I just can't stop reading!!! You're amazing!!

        • KyleBerg gold member
          October 16, 2008
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          Haha. read as much as you want =)
          You are too kind


  • Symphony
    October 15, 2008
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    Congrats Kylester


  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 15, 2008

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    Love this. The concept is great! Thanks so much for entering my contest. Be proud of your work! It’s an honor to have it shown here!


    • KyleBerg gold member
      October 15, 2008
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      Thank you so much for the comment and the silver =)
      It was a pleasure to enter your contest and I'm so glad you liked my piece.


  • November-Dani
    October 10, 2008

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    Wow, how can you fit so much in so little words. I admire the way you portray so much in all your short poems.
    Dani.

    • KyleBerg gold member
      October 11, 2008
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      Hehe, it's a challenge that i quite enjoy =)
      Thanks for the lovely comment


  • xDemonicxAngelx
    October 9, 2008

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    I am amazed!
    This was so brilliant, and just so superbly written! I agree with the other comment You definately should get gold with this. So beautifully written, yet haunting. I am in awe.

    Just.... Incredible.

    Best of luck in the contest!

    Take care


    • KyleBerg gold member
      October 9, 2008
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      Awww you people are too generous!
      Thank you very much for your kind words, I am glad you enjoyed it


  • Symphony
    October 9, 2008

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    Kyle = Amazing. This = Inspirational. Result = Gold Trophy.

    I don't need to say anymore


    • KyleBerg gold member
      October 9, 2008
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      Oh wow.. your mathematical equations are very kind =)
      Oh! I hope you didn't jinx it! lol
      Thank you muchly

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