A divided soul swings with the sway
Dancing inside all of this dissidence
Dangling in twelve strands of DNA
Where consciousness and kerosene kiss
Lighting the fire of life, ablaze
Paint me with pain and bliss
Yes, I will lay with you here
The meaning of it all...
still unclear
Traveling from tear to tear
To be wrapped again in cotton and cashmere
Ecstasy come, come over here...
I want to be with you completely
Manifest love so sweetly
Holey lovers kiss in harmony,
to the sound of skin on skin
Fire forming essence within
Never was this a sin
Send me starlight in the dead night
Drizzle me in droplets of divinity
For your nectar I have a great affinity
You'll find my heart,
right behind whats tearing it apart
If you don't mind waiting,
I'm sure I'll be able to stop it from braking
Rest in the roses till I return
Worry not, forever I will burn
Come with me into the chasm,
of what we could never fathom
Dive into this truth serum aquarium,
and dare to imagine
To swim in woken waters with bona fide beings
Who talk to God without religion...
and fly without wings
Who listen to the caged bird as she sings,
and always knows why the bee, he stings
A divided soul swings with the sway
Without this love division is here to stay
May we never forget this night...
when one dove and one love took flight
May we remember bounty as our birthright
And bring cosmic clarity to the light of day
Detect what lays dormant in our DNA
Reduce reality down to its essence for a while
Until we emerge from the latter days of denial,
and say...
Thank you Gods for this paradise
Paid in blood,
it was worth the price...
to know the love,
the love,
love,
love,
from above...
and below
Forever I will follow,
wherever it may go...
whats going on in your portals girls and boys?
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this is so pretty...
I'm gonna share this okay..? -
WITH THE POWER OF LOVE, ANYTHING IS POSSIBLE
I stammer to express myself.....
I don't want to put parameters around this quite yet...
so I may even comment again.
But to me...this is wonderfully romantic.
Contentment and sweet sweet love.
It had a...
soaring into a blinding light..
feeling to me,
as you cradle the readers heart.
There is a Yeats piece i would like to compare this to....
....He Remembers forgotten Beauty...
It has the stunning atmosphere of that piece.
There is not one thing I would change here....
It is a work of beauty.
Do I dare say you have out did yourself?
No way......you have cracked the sky...
I only hope you never rise so high from my weary eyes that your words reach other worlds that I can not see.
KEEP ON PUSHIN
STRAIGHT AHEAD,
MY GYPSY CHILD,
LOWELL.

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You just have so much content in this piece I feel I need to read it again and again to truly grasp it. Your imagery is mesmerizing, your language is astounding. I truly enjoyed this piece. My favorite stanza was
Ecstasy come, come over here...
I want to be with you completely
Manifest love so sweetly
Holey lovers kiss in harmony,
to the sound of skin on skin
Fire forming essence within
Never was this a sin
Breathtakingly beautiful...love to read your work!


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AWESOME
Awesome, beautiful, flowing and completely emotionally full up to the brim. Truly amazing.
Tal.

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Breathtaking!!!
This piece held me fast from start to finish. You have a very eloquent way with words and imagery. I felt like I was there watching this love unfold and following it. I absolutely adore this piece of art. Great background too. Yours in poetry,
gypsy


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