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Summer Love

Boy with the summer eyes,
left ice-cream smeared over my eyes.
Singing up to fading skies.
Left alone between goodbyes.

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  • xDemonicxAngelx
    October 9, 2008

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    I liked this, you said so much with the words that you used. This is very well written. Best of luck in the contest!

    Take care


  • Nidaeah
    October 9, 2008

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    Awesome!

    I adore how simple it is. Yet, there is alot of feeling and emotion in your words. Thank you! Good Luck!