Suns glow; reflecting frosty glass,
filling up air with warmth.
Rhythmic beat de-freezes spirit
lifts upwards into snowy cotton
Angels guide lost souls, colourful
rainbow warming hearts with love.
Author notes
Entwining Beauty
A contest entry
- just let your heart be free by sheltered.
450 points, ended October 9, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Check it out by mcw120588.
490 points, ended November 5, 2008, 35 entries
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This is beautiful, you give such a feeling of hope in the end of this poem, lovely imagery too. Best to you
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Short, sweet, great imagery.
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interesting. the warmth of sun and the frost of glass the defreezing allowing for the spirit to lift the depiction of clouds and the hope to be given direction over the rainbow to the love? just connecting images and it comes across as a beautiful soft spoken poem. thanks for entering
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Well this left me with a warm feeling inside.
Super imagery.
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forgot to add the applause, sorry
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So well done
Yes the muse is back, you have really created a contest winner here the sun does warm hearts with love, I also like you new name, blessings with love John
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